iPod 1:36 AM ⌖ Bluetooth
Notes
January 4, 2014, 1:33 AM
Start with something blunt.
One line, then it's locked forever.

Rules

The score compares the verse against C17H21NO4. Aim for 8 locked lines. Total words should land near 17. Total syllables should land near 21. Use 1 dash across the poem. Use 4 commas across the poem. Repeated endings and rhymes help close the structure. Balanced line lengths and syllable patterns make the result cleaner. Periods stabilize. Commas flex. Exclamation and question marks agitate.
FORMULA READ / VERSE SEALED

Result

55%
Final poem